⑥省略句。如:
if so, victory will be ours.
you can make some changes wherever necessary.
⑦对比,这是中文中也常用的方法。如:
failure is not a crime, but failure to learn from failure is.
when i play, i feel excited, and after it i feel relaxed.
(二).通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
[原文]he stopped us half an hour ago. he made us catch the next offender.
[修正]he stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
[原文]we had a short rest. then we began to play happily. we sang and danced.
some told stories. some played chess.
[修正]after a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing,telling jokes and playing chess.
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