(四)倒叙式开头
在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It’s a … story.
二、怎样写好正文
(一).在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。
①强调句
[原文]my parents praised ah fu warmly. it had saved my little sister bravely.
[修正]my parents praised ah fu warmly. it was our brave ah fu who had saved my little sister
bravely.
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